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I didn't know love until I met you.
Nothing in my life had ever felt so true.
You were the reason I went day to day,
Washing all of my depression away.

I wish I could make everything all right,
Every second I think of that night.
The way you broke my heart with only few words.
Did more to me than being stabbed by a thousand swords.

I didn't know pain until I met you.
Even know, nothing has ever felt so true.
You used to be the reason I went day to day,
But now your make me wish I could fade away.
Hey. I think that this poem expresses exactly how I feel about love. I hope that you guys can sort of relate to it, and enjoy it, this being my first real deviation.

Update Time ... Havoc was right. Know should be Now. Good joob, thanks for pointing that out to me. /me blushes. Lol.
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ElinaGR Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
beautiful!
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Labbonno Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Professional Writer
so true & nice, love it.:heart:
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berlinadict Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
i know its inevitable, but i never want to feel this way..i know its coming at some point in my future. ive decided its worth the risk..i think.
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Webkinz-queen Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
Lovely and perfectly put~
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EccentricArrow Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Student Writer
Its true...I know how that feels. I like how its written.
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Galil-Galad Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
dude this is nice its perfect :hug:
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hundrick Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Student Photographer
OMG this is good stuff, sorry for ur feelings though
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LoveForArts Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Student
Couldn't be more related to that.
Perfect*
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Photographer202 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
I know that feeling. This is really reall good work. =]
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snowy989 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2003
I can relate to that right now in my life. It really touched me. Good job.
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