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I didn't know love until I met you.
Nothing in my life had ever felt so true.
You were the reason I went day to day,
Washing all of my depression away.

I wish I could make everything all right,
Every second I think of that night.
The way you broke my heart with only few words.
Did more to me than being stabbed by a thousand swords.

I didn't know pain until I met you.
Even know, nothing has ever felt so true.
You used to be the reason I went day to day,
But now your make me wish I could fade away.
Hey. I think that this poem expresses exactly how I feel about love. I hope that you guys can sort of relate to it, and enjoy it, this being my first real deviation.

Update Time ... Havoc was right. Know should be Now. Good joob, thanks for pointing that out to me. /me blushes. Lol.
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ElinaGR Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011
beautiful!
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Labbonno Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010  Professional Writer
so true & nice, love it.:heart:
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berlinadict Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010
i know its inevitable, but i never want to feel this way..i know its coming at some point in my future. ive decided its worth the risk..i think.
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Webkinz-queen Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
Lovely and perfectly put~
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EccentricArrow Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Student Writer
Its true...I know how that feels. I like how its written.
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Galil-Galad Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
dude this is nice its perfect :hug:
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hundrick Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Student Photographer
OMG this is good stuff, sorry for ur feelings though
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LoveForArts Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2010  Student
Couldn't be more related to that.
Perfect*
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Photographer202 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010
I know that feeling. This is really reall good work. =]
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snowy989 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2003
I can relate to that right now in my life. It really touched me. Good job.
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badrad Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2003
So true!
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electrolytic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2002
been there, felt that

feels shit doesnt it?

this is very good, you grasp and convey the concept quite well. keep it up
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black Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2002
I didn't know pain until I met you.
Even know, nothing has ever felt so true.
You used to be the reason I went day to day,
But now your make me wish I could fade away..

-nuff said (again, no LOVE deviation vote :) (Smile) )
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bluepixel Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2001
......only a few words....that mad me sad too......


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kar0 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2001
great job, ben! .. *relates*
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supaspoida Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2001
Hmm...yea, this flows very well indeed, and has a very true to life theme as well. Keep it up ;) (Wink)

Supaspoida
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baranromis Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2001
Very nice work...

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idlejam Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2001
very sad.. and very true... i feel like that right now as a matter of fact.. great poem. it touched me very deeply. and i can relate!

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klynx Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2001
Great work e33. Very nice poem.
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isonica Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2001
I dont usually like rhyming poems but this one is really cool... Nice.

isonica.com
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gundams Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2001
jesus ben, your real poetic, thats a real good poem.. i know exactly how you feel.. and what makes this even better.. is that it came from inside, good work ;D
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havoc Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2001
Very nice man, i can relate to it. btw, shouldn't "Even know, nothing has ever felt so true." be "Even now..." ;) (Wink)
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graphicfish Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2001
This is really good. Pretty much how i feel right now. Nice job.

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stuzangel Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2001
i think at one time or another we all feel this way. I've been there. Great poem!!

~*~Never Stop Dreaming
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flesh Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2001
/me puts this in his ben scrap book

my lil benie's first deviation and he wrote a poem for me! aw
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gaiden Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2001
hmm, this poem is me, this is how i feel

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ioco Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2001
oooo ben depressed = mean ben D-: nice job with the wording in this one ben , great way describing inner feelings , the fade away part really hung me for a sec , had to read it over one more time :-D

-loco :| (Mad) !
http://www.depaprovara.com
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